- The bedroom sequence
- Props have been used well
- Camera has a gentle pan
- Good acting
- Nice pan
- Steady camerawork
- Charlotte has done a good job with her acting
The criticism that we got included:
- Where is she? Is she a prisoner?
- Sounds is off when off screen talking comes in
- Shot of Charlotte is really long
- Mise en scene repetition
- Where does Lollie appear from? Check side of shot
- Voice over sound/ sound dissolves
